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The Eye of the Storm
The Eye of the Storm
By: Hordak's Pupil
Starlight Glimmer
“Wait! Where are you going?” Trixie asked trying catching up to me. I tell that we have stop this Storm King before it's too late. “WHAT! You want to go against that creep?” I tell her we have to do all we can while Twilight and the others go look for the queen. “We don't know what this maniac is capable of. I mean taking on Chrysalis is one thing but to this guy is leagues above her.”
“Which is why we need help,” I tell her as race down the streets. She asks me if we're going to the Crystal Empire to get Sunburst. “No, Sunburst has a bad case of unicorn flu and so does Shining Armor” I tell her as she asks who we are going to see, “the doctor.” she asks what could Dr. Stable do to fight the Storm King. “Not that doctor, I mean Dr. Whooves.”
“Are you nuts that pony is off is rocker,” Trixie says pulling my tail tr
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Literature
What is This? Chapter 2
Chapter II: A Perfect Evening
Sam
“Finally some peace and quiet,” I said laying on my bed and looking over the assignment Lancer gave us. I stared at the paper trying to figure out what I wanted to say but was having trouble thinking. My mind racing towards tonight's dinner with Danny and his family. I know it is simple dinner but something in me hopes it is more than that.
Since we entered high school I have wanted Danny to share his feelings for me. I know he has them but Danny is so clueless when it comes to expressing himself. You have to beat the truth out of him and ever since...I heard the sound of the front door open signaling my parents are back. “God help me,” I sighed looking up at the ceiling.
“Sammie!” I heard mom call out as races upstairs and barges into my room. “I have wonderful news. Tonight you are going to your first debutante ball. Colonel Williams is hosting his annual princess parade and you are finally old
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Literature
Solus Chapter 4
Chapter IV: Broken Promises

Hordak
"That miserable fleabag he'll ruin everything,” I said throwing a rock into the air and blasting it to bits. I have spent thousands of years searching for these items and now Grizzlor is going to ruin everything. “When he gets back I'm putting his sorry ass in his the slime pit,” I sit back on the throne trying to calm down. If that wasn't enough now the rebels know of my plans.
“Lord Hordak,” a trooper says as the door opens. “Horde Prime demands...,” I blast the fool into scrap metal for interrupting me. I press the comlink on my throne to get in touch with my lord on his warship.
“Ah Hordak,” the voice of Prime bellowed as he clenched his massive fist. “Where is this surprise you promised me. I am ready to leave and not heard a peep from you.” I assure him that I am working on it and that it will be ready soon. “It had better be, I am growing
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Literature
What is This Chapter 1
Danny Phantom: What is This?
By: Hordak's Pupil
Chapter I: Plans
 
Danny
“The creature likened himself to Satan, cast out of...,” Lancer droned on about Frankenstein. Normally this would be an interesting subject but our teacher dissects every last letter in the book and assigns it some deep meaning.
I look up at the clock on the wall; it seems frozen at one second to dismissal. My mind begins to wonder. Did I remember to lock ghost portal for tonight? Does my suit still fit? What happens... I am snapped back as Lancer slams a book on his desk. He asks if he is so boring that I don't want to stay here another second. “Uh no sir it's just that...,” he cuts me off and asks if I can answer whether man is born inherently good or inherently evil?
Before I can answer the bell rings and everyone rushes out, “Remember do to your essays on whether or not knowledge should be pursued heedless of cost,” he yells above the noise a
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Literature
Redemption Chapter 3
Chapter III: Visions

Starlight Glimmer
I slowly walk into the room, “Sunburst was right this place is amazing,” I said gazing at the sight before me. The walls covered from floor to ceiling in mirrors that cast various reflections all over. It was overwhelming and had to close my eyes for a moment to get my bearings. Speaking of the ceiling it was made of glass and cast into a prism projecting a rainbow everywhere.
I walk to the center of the room and sit down. I take a breath closing my eyes and focused on the light show in front me. I felt my thoughts and worries melt away as the world turned into a blank canvas. I begin to hear a noise behind me it sounds like chanting but it's in a language I don't understand. I see an image of ponies dressed in black robes whispering to each other.
I try to still my heart but it sounds like a drum echoing throughout the my body. I am paralyzed by some unknown force. The figures turn to face with glowing red eyes. One of
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Literature
Solus Chapter 3
Chapter III: The Sickness Within
Modulok
“Okay let's try it,” I told Entrapta as I thew the switch. I watched the gauge clime to 60,000 volts. She tells me the device is almost to full power. “We just need a little...,” sparks flew from the switch as it overloaded. “Damn I thought I...,”
“Thought you had what scientist?” the voice of Hordak says as I turn around and see the ruthless leader before me. I told him about my attempt to create a dimensional gateway large enough to banish the entire Whispering Woods into Limbo with all Rebels on it. “What of the project I ordered you to finish,” I walk over to slab with a covered form on it.
“All his systems are working properly, I just need an animating essence to bring him to life,” I explain as Hordak looks over the creation and demands when that will be “I am hoping to use some of the prisoners as batteries,” Hordak's eyes narrow as he transf
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Literature
Unholy Unions Chapter 27
Chapter XXVII: The Changelings are Coming
Queen Chrysalis
“Plasmius? Where are you? If this about the ponies I am...,” the hunter said as I emerged from the darkness. “YOU!” he raised his weapon at me. “Where is Plasmius?” he demanded to know as my drones started to growl at him. I told him there was no need for such hostilities. “Where is Vlad?” he asks looking around as if trying to calculate his chances of escape.
“He didn't call you; I did,” he lowers his weapon and stares at me. “I believe we can help each other out. You are Plasmius' pet?” he says that he no one's pet and the..., “spare me the dramatics he pays your bills doesn't he?” I tell him as he keeps his weapon fixed on me and asks what I am getting at. “A proposition, one you might find more attractive than whatever that power crazed human offers you.”
“What do you have that I could want,” he asks laug
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Literature
Redemption Chapter 2
Chapter II: Comfort
Sunburst
“Dearly beloved, we are gathered today to wed Striking Sword and Queen Frostine of Frigidia. Marriage is a wonderful...,” I began to say as Starlight came in. She said there was nothing I couldn't do- Royal Crystaller, wizard, and minister. “I wouldn't go that far,” I told her adjusting my glasses. I was surprised that Frostine had picked me.
“You're just nervous Sunburst,” Starlight assures me walking up to the table. “Rumor has it that you have something special planned.” I tell her that I learned a new spell that I think Frostine will just adore. “I am sure she will love it,” she says, “This is already quite the ceremony. Garble and Spike leading the Dragon Guard; Cadence and Armor serving as maid of honor and best stallion; and you presiding over the ceremony.” I tell her that I am surprised Striking was willing to have them in the party. “Striking has come a lon
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Literature
Solus Chapter 2
Chapter II: Dreams and Warnings
Hordak
“You miserable mealworm!” I sneered as the beast pleaded for mercy. He said he was close to obtaining the map when She-Ra stopped him. “I am tired your constant stupidity” He got on his knees promising he will destroy She-Ra and retrieve the map if I give him another chance. “Why should I do that? To give She-Ra another chance at humiliating me?”
“Please oh merciful one I won't fail again,” he begs as I think to myself. “You know my loyalty to you knows no bounds oh majestic Hordak.” I told him to get up and stop sniveling. I tell him I have another mission for him. “oh thank you my lord...,” I stopped him and told him that though we don't have a map legend says the first piece can be found at the Well of Sighs.
“I want you to go with Catra and Shadow Weaver to the well and retrieve the part.” Grizzlor thanks me for b
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Unholy Unions Chapter 26
Chapter XXVI: Spread Out!
Fluttershy
“I don't think he could have gone far,” Shining Armor says as he conjures a map of the castle. I asked him how he could have got out in the first place. That was a magic cage and not even....”Vlad, this is his doing. Who else would have the power to break a magic cage.”
“We'll keep en eye out for him. We better get a move on,” Applejack said as we came to three doors. Armor told us to stay back as it might be a trap. “How do we know which is the right door,” she asks as the unicorn study them.
“Maybe we should split up, each of us take a door,” Trixie suggests but Shining Armor says that's what they would want to break us up. He conjures the map again and studies it. While they are looking at the map I thought I heard a voice.
“Help! Help!” it cried out from behind the third door. It sounded familiar. “Fluttershy,” I gasped when I heard it speak my name
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Literature
Redemption Chapter 1
My Little Pony: Redemption
By: Hordak's Pupil based on original characters by Gojira012 and DisneyBrony2012
Chapter I: Sacred Rites
Striking Sword
“OW will you quit it before I...,” I took a breath remembering what Frostine told me about patience. “Miss Pommel I would appreciate if you would be...more careful with those pins,” I said looking down at the white earth pony as she took my measurements. “I thought you would have it finished by now?” I asking trying to remain still.
“It is done I am just making some final adjustments. I would hate to for the sleeves too be long,” she says as I as smiled and give a out a little laugh. It wasn't one of derision but an actual laugh at the thought of me tripping on the way to the altar. “I think you are going to love it Mr. Sword,” Pommel said as there was a knock at the door. “Come in,” she chimes as Trixie enters.
“Do Trixie's eyes deceive
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Unholy Unions Chapter 25
Chapter XXV: I Ain't Afraid of No Ghost
Applejack
“I think we better make our to the thr...,” I began to say as I hear something come down the hall. I motion for everyone to get back while me and Trixie go find out what's going on. She asks what I think it is. I tell her I am not sure. It sounded like two ponies coming this way. I could tell that was one going slower possibly injured.
“Is it changelings?” Trixie asks nervously casting a spell. I told her to be ready just in case. She swallowed and closed her eyes.
I could see two figures walk up the ramp on the other side of the corridor. They make their way up the ramp and towards us. “It's okay,” I tell Trixie as I race over to the ramp to meet Shining Armor and Fluttershy. “What in tarnation happened to you,” I ask the stallion as Trixie and myself help Fluttershy carry him into the room.
“Vlad's skeletons, they attacked us I got hit in the flank. I would have been
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Unholy Unions Chapter 24
Chapter XXIV: Pitfall
Fluttershy

“Wha...happened,” Armor says as he massages his temples. “It felt like I got hit by a carriage,” I help him up and explain the medicine I gave him made him sleepy. “It gave me the craziest nightmare. I dreamed that Chrysalis was here and...,” I tell him that she was but I took care of her. “You've come quite a long way Fluttershy,” Armor says as I help him up.
“I think she was looking to feed but after one hit she just gave up.” I explain as Armor tries to figure out what's going on. He says it's unlike her to give up so easily unless she has something else planned. “I did notice a lot of changelings heading toward the entrance to minds.”
Shining cast a map spell showing where everyone is. “Twily is heading to the throne room. We better follow her lead,” he said as I point a large mass of changelings leaving the castle. “It's not like her to retreat
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Unholy Unions Chapter 23
Chapter XXIII: Queen’s Move
Pinkie Pie
“Over here!” I shout as Sam races over to a group of pods. She takes out her knife and and slices one of them open. I catch the guard and help steady him. He looks at me and asks what is going on. “Changelings have invaded the castle.” His eyes grow wide and draws his sword.
“There is too many of them to face alone. We need to get more guards freed.” the guard looks at Sam strangely but I assure him that's she's nice. He nods and takes off to free more of his troops. I ask her what the plan is when we reach the throne room. “I don't know...,” she began to say when we heard a noise nearby.
I walk towards the sound, “Hello?” I call out as see someone laying on the ground. It was Dani; she was covered in changeling slime and trying to break free. “How did you get over here?” She looks up and say Chrysalis caught her and left her here. Something didn't fee righ
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Solus Chapter 1
Danny Phantom: Solus
By: Hordak's Pupil
Chapter I: Clues and Clues
Princess Adora
“Finally,” I said opening the door to my quarters and flopped onto my bed. It had been a rough day. Hordak has been relentless attacking 10 villages this week. “And they don't have any value all they had were archives.” I massaged my temples as I got comfortable and sank into the cotton sheets.
I grabbed my calendar from the night stand, “The 8th already?” How could I have forgot. It's Duncan's birthday and I promised Adam that I would come help set up the palace. I grabbed my sword to send a message apologizing for not coming when I heard a knock at the door.
“Princess,” one of Queen Angella's guards said walking into the room. He said there was attack on the village of Khamael. I climb out of bed and ask him if any others on the way. “Yes, they are the site now,” he says as I thank him and leave the room so I
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OMG This Movie

Journal Entry: Fri Oct 6, 2017, 3:09 PM
I loved the MLP movie everything about it was amazing. Seeing the ponies on the big screen was amazing. I am no good at giving reviews so I will say this: Twilight Sparkle (wow) plz Rarity encantada Pinkie pie (the Fourth Wall) plz Applejack (together) plz Es increible! MLP:Evil fluttershy 6/6 ponies  

  • Listening to: My Little Pony: The Movie sondtrack
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:iconlorddoomplz: ASSEMBLE OUR FORCES, I WANT A FULL ASSULT ON THE COUNTRY OF KANDAQ RIGHT NOW!!!!
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yes my lord
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:iconlorddoomplz: I'm pissed so I want this done classic Nazi/terrorist style, heard up everyone there line em up against the wall and excute them, their mostly zombies so aim for the heads, but remember, their leader is mine
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thy will be done
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V1EWT1FUL Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahem
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